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Comments from Daddycums
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| 2010-05-20 11:24:28 | On a Moonlit Night, Wishes May Come True | Really, now: Claiming not to be the troll when you're using the same tactic of trying to divide us is rather disingenuous, wouldn't you say? On the other hand, I love the irony of your comment claiming I'm not as talented as Wantsomefun, considering he himself enjoyed this story. (See the very first comment) Very amusing. But don't worry; I'm confident in my worth as an author (and it's a lot higher than you give me credit for). Besides, I happen to agree with you that Wantsomefun is quite talented. Check out the "Calling all Readers" thread on the forum and you'll notice I voted for his story in the contest. -Daddycums |
| 2010-06-01 14:42:44 | After reading "Anticipation," I had high hopes for this story. You did not disappoint. You took the taboo subject of incest and created a hot and heavy story around it. I love the buildup as the father deals with his attraction to his daughter that clashes against his natural protective instincts that tell him that he should be having the "sex talk" with her, realizing that it might be too much for him to handle. Then you captured well the combination of shock and arousal of the father watching his girlfriend seduce his daughter, believable yet thrilling at the same time. Gillian is a little too good to be true, but that's what makes her so fun. It's too bad she didn't stick around, but her role was still satisfying. I have to disagree with those that think the ending ruined the story. Normally I detest pregnancies in erotic stories, but this one worked, especially since it was brief and happened off-screen. -Daddycums |
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| 2010-07-04 16:23:29 | The Restaurant_(3) | Normally I would take one look at this story, see how atrocious the spelling, punctuation, and grammar is, and move on to something else. Since you made a big deal on the forums, however, about how you don't write your stories in the same text speak that you use on the forums, I feel you pretty much asked for your readers to criticize your writing capability. I am willing to forgive the occasional technical error. The story itself is more important. But when the technical errors are so numerous as to get in the way of my enjoyment of the story, then you've failed to do your job as an author. A bit of advice. Swallow your pride, admit your weakness in writing, and ask someone to edit your stories for you before you post. |
| 2010-07-26 20:20:51 | A Good Kind Of Trouble | I disagree that anything felt rushed. I thought the pacing was just fine. And the interaction between the characters were just fine. A good, solid romance and worth a positive rating. My only complaint is that you entered this in the Summer Vacation contest and it doesn't quite fit the theme. Not so much a vacation as stranded in the middle of Texas. But I won't hold that against you because you told a good story. |
| 2010-07-26 20:25:15 | Emily Goes To Vegas | This was the third of the contest entries I read, and after two hyper-emotional romances, it was a nice change of pace to read something that was all sex and no story. Very hot! And if I owned a hotel and caught you rubbing suntan lotion on each other like that at the pool, I wouldn't send in the hotel staff to tell you to stop, I'd grab my video camera! -Daddycums |